βwhen He was child ,
school was like jail for him , all the time he looked to his watch in the school , the continues sound of bell gives him a sign of freedom , school gate was like way to freedom. he decided not to run but to fly.
Now , he is a young guy with lots of dreams in his eyes , he wants to fly out of his home , now jail changed I.e. HOME. he wants to do whatever he wants to do without any interruption from his family , I don’t know whether he will succeed or not , but he is trying to make happy to his family and friends too , without thinking about his future. Now ,
LETS MOVE TO HIS Agedness ; last and final jail I.e. this world ; now he is become most senior person in the family ; old age effects him by many diseases , dependency and down knees . become burden on the family and to this world , now what should he do now ? starts Worship god ; and bagging for the Moksha ; start counting list of karma and suddenly God thinks call him ; no more jail , come on Son ; he is no more :
valuable people starts crying for burden in front of society and they know ; they are still in jail ; count down begins.
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Great story, loved the metaphors.
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You’re welcome and I will.
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I love your concept it’s really tells the reality of life .
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Very nice Ankit. Loved the way you described on Jail.
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Thank you ma’am π thanks for lots of love π β€
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Thanks to you to Ankit. Have a nice day.
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You too π
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irony of life
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Yes , thank you for comment π
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Keep being free my friend… Spread your wings and feathers like a peacock !
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Thanks for positive expression ; if we are writing ; we are free π
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Unfortunately, this is a lot of people’s lives; they remain imprisoned in some form or another.
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Yes , but this time we have to think about ourselves.
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Great writing! So sad how true this is!
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This is sad but we know this ; now we can free ourselves.
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Thanks you π
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Reminds me of the seven stages of life by William Shakespeare.
This is well thought and lovely! π
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Three stages is enough ; unable to handle these three π ππ
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It’s a short piece of poetry. You may read if you feel like. π
“All the world’s a stage and all men and women are mere players” is a verse from that composition!
Never let the words fall short. π
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Thank you so much gauri π
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